'Slap' third outcome

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Now this one i did i like more than the others, i changed the layout of the 'lap' to overlap eachother and it looks like a really nice staging and intriguing for the audience to see until the 'S' comes on screen and collides with them. i also added an extra reaction from the 'lap' with them knocking into eachother i think this benefits the action im trying to create.
on the 'S' i changed the arc of how it travels i also used slow in slow out, slow in as it comes on screen and slow out as it joins the other letters i found this to help an aweful lot and it was smoothe.